some plot problems
Kefka's family is Celes (his Sister) if you consider her family since they're both test tube babies. Davis and his wife never would have existed, and Kefka was always insane (from what we can define from his character).
Clyde and Baram's story was shaky as they were fought in a cavern, not the forest.
Relm is just a bitch, that part bored me.
Otherwise you got potential. Put it to good use.